Tuesday, April 9, 2013

A to Z: Character Creations; Huriel


"I can get with any girl out here," Huriel gloated.

"Except for that one," Cody pointed to a tall blonde standing in line at the water slide.

Huriel didn't respond with words. He shot Cody a 'We'll see about that' look and began to wade out of the pool toward his target. The cement was scorching but Huriel strutted confidently with his pecs flexed and head high. Water dripped off of his tan skin that covered his muscular angles. Average girls stared, but they were of no concern to Huriel. He walked passed everyone in line and approached the blonde.

"Thanks for saving my place," he said nonchalantly as he straightened his shorts flexing every muscle in his body.

She dropped her eyebrows and cocked her hips,"Your place in line is back there!"

He admired her body as she pointed for him to go to the end of the line. This was his type of girl and he was prepared for a challenge.

"Oh, I'm sorry. I thought you were Tiffany. My mistake." He stuck out his chest, "I am Huriel but everyone calls me Cookie."

The girl broke a smile and Huriel knew the victory was his.


  1. Very nice. I've already grasped an emotion toward this young man. This was quite visual, and the dialogue crisp. :-)

  2. He's certainly got confidence to spare, that Huriel!

  3. Why is Huriel so confident with a nickname like Cookie? :D

    Chontali Kirk